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Author: Username
Reviewed By: Eunriehyun
Requested Date: 10/00/15
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Title: 10/10
Your title was very impressive and quiet connected your story. It was well explained.
Description/Foreword: 10/10
It description was short and made me curious with only one sentence! It appeared beautifully cordinated and organized.
Character Development/Showcasing: 10/10
I love the inner action between the two main characters in both point of view. I never thought it any better. The characters seemed to be real and well connected to the minor characters.
Behind the Author's Mind: 40/40
This story was very well plotted, had a beautiful storyline. The narrative of the story was enchanting and as a reader I couldn't help but to continue reading to the very heartaching end. T.T
Proper Use of the English Language: 25/25
Your story didn't had any errors as far as I could see. I notice your vocabulary used and it seemed that you thought of it and edit more than a few times before the review. I could see the dedication and commitment.
General Enjoyment/Last Comment: 5/5
You worked hard for your story and I truly enjoy it to the end. I would've wish they had been together, but at least the couple fie together. Such a touching scene and with the other *cries* Your story was perfect and I'm sorry it took me sooooooooooo long to review it.
Total: 100/100
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