Wanted: Dr. Zhang - donbaekwood
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NOTE: Rated M - Chapters: 22 - Spoiler Alert
(10/10) Title: I loved the title, I thought it fit perfectly well with the storyline and plot. I'm glad you didn't titled it "The Doctor That Kills" or something like that, cliche. It was a simple and clean title. Doctor could be for any professional rank, so I wouldn't say your title gave away the whole story ideal to your readers, instead it's catchy and unique. When I first came across the title, I was so happy that Yixing is some sort of wanted professional, scientist or doctor, so I wouldn't say the title disappointed me in any way.
(10/10) Character: At first I was like, "Not gonna work, too many characters" BUT I have to say I love the way each character developed in here and I'm glad each character played an important role in shaping the story. Yixing's character went to a player, Seyeon's faithful boyfriend, and then totally mysterious and that's just interesting. Seyeon still has that urge of wanting to get blood on her hand but she's repenting and she's developing feelings for Yixing, and beside her inner circle of friends and family, she's showing a lot of caring and thoughts for Yixing's mother. She's slowly caring for his family as well. Baekhyun's is slowly accepting Yixing and Seyeon's relationship (in my opinion. I feel like he could totally go against their plans and save Yixing >.<). Brenda is really an interesting gal in my opinion, she seems to be surrounded with a bunch of guys only, I even wondered if she's ever had a decent girl friend.
(10/10) Originality: The feels are so real! It's modern time and the many different countries: USA, Korea, and China are well plan out in each scene. Kudos! I want their Americanos (lol).
(40/40) Storyline/Plot: The pace and progression was smoothed, nothing was rushed and nothing was dragged. I love the storyline (I loved Doctor Stranger as well) and maybe it was because in the original I shipped Hoon and Jaehee (lol), so I was glad she was casted in here as well. All the secrets and background stories are played often to develop each character and that was beautiful. Chanyeol and Sehun's story really added a great twist to the overall story! It made the story more delicious(?) Lol. I got to say though, because I read and usually love stories with a lot of twists and secrets, I predicted the relationship between Baekhyun and Seyeon near the beginning, as well as the one between Sehun and Chanyeol. Then again they were still awesome twists! I think I have an idea to what Yixing is thinking but I may be wrong (xD).
(22/25) Grammar/Errors: A few repeats, misplaced words, or left out words were found. But other than that, the grammar wasn't terrible, in fact it was great! Some proofreading then it's all good. Numbers below 10 should be spelled out i.e. 5 = five. A lot of he, her, him, and her were misplaced, some him turned to her and vice versa. Common errors, nothing major. You know your stuff so that's a major plus!
(5/5) Overall Enjoyment: I love Seyeon and I'm not a huge EXO fan BUT once I started reading I couldn't stop. Seriously, I was hooked from beginning to end. You may have noticed that I upvoted and subscribed before we changed your original reviewer to me, I checked out your story in advance when you requested and I just had to subscribed. It looked so goooood and then upvoted just by reading the foreword. I'd have to say your story made it to my top five favorite stories. I'll definitely be anticipating the next chapter because I fell in love with Sehun's last statement in chapter 22. I'm glad to have read this story!
(97/100) Points Total
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Review for: donbaekwood
Requested on: 08/29/2014
Finished On: 09/2/2014
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