Oppas' Little Girl

Title(4/5)

The title sounds okay, I can’t say much about it.

Poster & Background & Trailer(10/10)

The poster & background were both beautifully made— I like it.

Description & Foreword(7/10)

The organization of the description and foreword combined is wonderful and greatly appreciated. Now to analyze them separately— the description was accurate. I just don’t get why you had two descriptions written. You could have just written one big description rather than separating the two.

To be honest, I didn’t find the letter in the foreword to be very convincing because it just sounds like they’re writing their daughter a letter about them going on a cruise and their daughter, Ji Eun, has to stay with 7 boys— I think there just needs to be a bit more emotional written into it like maybe not mentioning that her parents are ‘probably dead by now.’ Just a thought.

Plot(7/10)

The plot sounds pretty interesting but it’s also very generic— I’m pretty sure I’ve seen many other fics out there that is about a girl whose parents suddenly die and she is to live with another family, or a group of boys, who is close to the girl’s family or friend. Then she falls for one of the boys but there are some internal conflicts.

Then again, I like the suspense happening on your recent update.

Originality(7/10)

Again, it’s a generic fanfic/plot but I do find it to have some originality.

Flow(5/5)

The flow was neither too fast nor too slow.

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary(30/30)

All were well used, so I have no problem.

Writing Style(8/10)

I definitely love the way you write; I can picture every scene and feel every emotion being written.

Overall Enjoyment(5/10)

This particular fanfic was pretty enjoyable but I think I would have enjoyed it some more if knew the faces and names of Infinite but I don’t, sadly, so I couldn’t really enjoy it. Then again, this was a nice fanfic and I might come back to read it if I decide to get to know Infinite. Good luck with your story!

Total – 83/100

reviewer: vangbby
sorry if it just sounds like a whacky review ; I'm just so out of reviewing-mode atm ><