Consequences

a. Title (4/5)
It's simple, and it's definitely a good one-word title. Simply because it helps describe the synopsis. 

b. Poster & Background & Trailer (6/10)
- No trailer, so I didn't count any points for that. The background is subtle, and the poster isn't really shouting 'READ MY STORY', I know you didn't make it, but next time look for a better poster creator.

c. Description & Foreword (6/10)
I felt you could've been a lot more informative. Your description most likely gave off the impression to readers that its just a collection of , when it's obviously more than that. 

d. Plot (6/10)
It was a bit unrealistic for me at first, but as I kept on, it got more clear about what the actual problem and plot was.

e. Originality (7/10)
I can't say that I've seen a lot of stories like this, so you deserve that 7. Although others may think different, this is what I think. 

f. Flow (3/5)
The transition was okay. But I think you should've taken just a little bit more time on the 'confession' part. 

g. Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (15/30)
Capitalization, punctuation, and the way you described some moments were not very imaginable due to the Grammar mistakes. Your parts were never-ending and nothing was capitalized; focus some more on that.

h. Writing Style (7/10) 
I think your style is good, but instead of using, "*sigh* I-i know it doesn't make sense.." You could change it to, "Hyukjae sighed and looked down, 'I-I know it doesn't make sense..'

 
i. Overall Enjoyment (8/10)
Since I am a hardcore EunHae shipper, I liked it ^0^ It was good. I think you rushed it too much towards the end. Nonetheless, you should and will improve. Here's a few tips & side comments
to you from me!
- Try working on your grammar, punctuation, and instead of using, 'said, answered' you should use other terms that mean the same thing to almost the same, like 'replied, stated, improvised'.
- Think about your whole story before you start one. Plan out the plot, think of how the majority of your chapters will be, make sure your story is understandable; not so messy &
confusing. 
- Look for reliable graphic/poster shops & makers. There's a bunch of talented ones out there, and some you need to wait for.. but hey. Patience is key, and the story poster+background
will catch the eye of the reader. 
- Your story synopsis in the description/foreword should be informal about what this is about, but at the same time, leaving the reader to actually want to read it. Some ending sentences
for synopsis' in the description are, 'Secrets are revealed and the trouble is just starting.' 'Will they fall in love? Or will they be forever foes? Find out in.. (story name)' 'This is war.' 
'I will not back down.' 'Will she escape his love trance?' and so forth. 

Total - 62/100 

reviewer: mooncake