Last Hope

Title (1/5)

I don’t think that Last Hope was the right title for this story. Something like that makes me
think of a suicidal person or something. But Jonghyun and Minho meet each other and then find
refugee in the mental hospital with all those people and things seem to get better slowly, so I
think you should have made it Hope Reborn or something cheesy like that.

Poster/Background/Trailer (5/10)

I really like the poster but there are some things that I would change about it. First, you have half
a Minho and a whole Jonghyun. I think it should have been their top halves and then the title
of the story cutting in the middle and then the bottom half be a picture of Seoul or something.
But in Minho’s picture there was forest in the background but for Jonghyun there was a picture,
so I think that part should have been cut out and had forest too. One last thing, the picture of
Jonghyun is too faded compared to Minho’s and it makes the poster look a bit off.

Description & Foreword (5/10)

The description is a little boring. I know you gave us the basic info for the story, but I would
have been way more interested if you made it more detailed and dark.

Plot (10/10)

Loved it! Normally I won’t read zombie apocalypse stories but this one completely caught my
interest!

Originality (9/10)

I have seen a few stories around that say zombie apocalypse but I haven’t read them so I can’t
really judge this so I docked a point.

Flow (4/5)

Your pace for the story was really good, but there is one thing that I didn’t like. When they talk
or think or remember about their past lives, like when you were telling us about Taemin dying,
it was sort of rushed. I think you should have given that more detail, like make some flashback

scenes. Adding some of those would totally give the story some oomph!

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (30/30)

I was seriously going to go through and nitpick everything because I haven’t done that in my
recent reviews but DARN YOU you wrote everything so perfectly! But that’s a good thing :D

Writing Style (9/10)

You have a really good writing style!

You give description and details enough so that the readers can actually picture everything that’s
happening. Emotions are written great and I love how you portrayed Jonghyun and Minho.
Normally everyone writes Minho as a pushover so I love his cockiness here!

Overall Enjoyment (10/10)

LOVED it! I’m totally subscribing!

Total Score: 83/100%

Congratz! Your story will be in the recommended list since peacelovehugs loved it!

reviewed by: peacelovehugs