Encouragement 

a. Title (3/5)

It's simple and only one word, but it's just too common. 

b. Poster & Background & Trailer (7/10)

It's cute and simple. You made it on your own again and it's a creative one. It could have been better if the pictures were HQ. The font is also quiet creepy, that's just me, and I think it is. 

c. Description & Foreword (7/10)

A short teaser "I love you?" That's really simple and I understand that it's short since it's only a one-shot. 

d. Plot (8/10)

It's a very sad story. I really like it. It made my heart sink when Jinyoung died in the end, and I actually imagined I was that girl and this story really encouraged me. There are not many memories with Jinyoung and you/me, but it seems that they have been so close together and really loved each other. Whatever, I really like it. I was stopping my tears so no tears fell but I love it, it's touching. 

e. Originality (5/10)

Not an original story. I'm a fan of drama stories actually. When I was new to AFF, the stories I read first were one-shot and almost all of them were a sad ending and yours is another one. It's just too short and not so many things happened, but it's touching. 

f. Flow (5/5)

It's a one shot and it's rushed. But still I give you a perfect score here. Although this is super short like your other one shot, that's what makes it easy to understand. 

g. Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (20/30)

No major mistakes, just a few misspelled words and wrong grammars. Also wrong use of tenses. I know I'm not being specific right now. Just tell me if you want me to show them to you. Other than that, not major. 

h. Writing Style (9/10)

Simple and short. 

i. Overall Enjoyment (10/10) - 

Hmm, I really enjoy sad stories. Don't hate me but I love it when I cry because of sad stories, they touch my heart or something like that so I really enjoyed it even though Jinyoung died. That's the sad part, I'm not happy about it but I enjoyed reading it since it's very touching. 

Total score: 74 / 100 %