When two worlds collide

a. Title (4/5)
�Title sounds interesting

b. Poster & Background & Trailer (7/10)
-I liked the poster but the background not so much
-should have a matching background or something closer to you theme

c. Description & Foreword (6/10)
-Your description and foreword seems too be common with other AFF fanfics
-I liked your foreword as you only focus on Eunji,Woohyun and their fathers

d. Plot (7/10)
-Should make it sound more interesting but its still okay

e. Originality (6/10)
-Most AFF fanfics that I read its almost the same

f. Flow (3/5)
-It�s a bit slow

g. Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (21/30)
-Grammar its alright
-I read it like a script should have less dialogue
-Not many spelling mistakes but still can be read
-Vocabulary is alright

h. Writing Style (8/10)
-Its alright but you should have Povs so you do not need to put Eunji said this Woohyun said this etc

i. Overall Enjoyment (6/10)
-Your story is okay but to me it is boring also.You should have a in the story and a problem so reader are more interested to read



Total - 68/100

reviewed by: KpopLover756