Eraser Dust

Title (4/5)

I admit that the title you chose was interesting and did pertain to the story, at least the end of it.
But honestly, I feel that the title doesn’t live up to the greatness of what you’ve written.

Poster/Background/Trailer (8/10)

The post was good, but the outline of the pencil and eraser dust doesn’t really fit. I think this
story would’ve been okay without a poster, but it’s your choice not mine.

Description & Foreword (10/10)

The description was interesting and I liked it. For some reason it made me think of a circus,
where Kris is standing by the big whatever it’s called and is beckoning Tao to come inside and
see the show.

Plot (10/10)

Really good.

Originality (10/10)

Definitely original.

Flow (5/5)

Good.

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (30/30)

Perfect.

Writing Style (9/10)

Good.

Overall Enjoyment (10/10)

I liked it. Sorry that the review is so plain, but there’s just not much to say about a one-shot.

Total Score: 96/100%

Congratz! Your story will be on the recommended list!

Reviewed by: peacelovehugs