calling nytslyer03
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a. Title (3/5)
-I did not like the title very much but its still okay
b. Poster & Background & Trailer (7/10)
-Matches the story well
-Black and white but match the story
c. Description & Foreword (7/10)
-Your description is okay I guess as I am no fond of reading of a story about guys only.
d. Plot (8/10)
-Its interesting
-Should put more effort in the Plot to make more interesting then it is
e. Originality (9/10)
-Very Original
f. Flow (5/5)
-Just right not too fast or too slow
g. Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (24/30)
-A few spelling mistakes here and there and you need to work a bit more on your punctuation
h. Writing Style (10/10)
- I like your writing style. I won’t say much.
i. Overall Enjoyment (7/10)
-At first I did not really enjoy reading but after a reading a few more chapters it's kinda interesting.
-I still enjoyed the whole story.
Total:80/100%
reviewed by: KpopLover756
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