b. Poster & Background & Trailer (10/10) - I'm not sure if that would count as a poster, but as for the image, it was appropriate. I especially admired the photo in which the hand was grasping onto the other one, as if it didn't want to let him/her go.

c. Description & Foreword (10/10) - Interesting, very interesting. It was exceptional, actually. Your foreword instantly got me itching to know more about the plot and what was happening. That was a perfect way to start it off, immediately grabbing the reader's attention. I can also tell, just by reading that one excerpt, your a proficient writer. 

d. Plot (9/10) - The beginning bored me a little, but I'm usually like that in the beginning because, I don't know, I just am. So there's nothing wrong with that. I was starting to get more anxious as to what would happen next once the story progressed.

e. Originality (10/10) - The title and foreword really caught my attention, which made me instantly think that this fic was going to be very original and unique. And thank goodness I was right. I love how Heechul's personality here is so different to what I'm used to in other fics. It's like you've taken the two characters and put them inside your own world, altering their personalities and stories.

f. Flow (5/5) - Your story wasn't moving too slow or too fast, so I appreciated that.

g. Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (30/30) - I didn't catch any grammar mistkaes.