If You Seek Romance

Title (4/5)
I instantly thought of that Brittany Spears song “If You Seek Amy.” Anyway, it caught my attention immediately. But Ga-in isn’t seeking romance yet, is she?

Poster & Background & Trailer (9/10)
I really like the poster. A background would have been nice. Maybe a solid light blue or Malibu blue?

Description & Foreword (10/10)
Thank you so much for not putting character profiles in your description and instead using a character chart! It’s very lovely, by the way.

Your description really caught my attention! It’s rare I review a story where the description is perfect. I do prefer the credits and authors note you put at the end of the foreword to be at the end of the description instead.

As for the foreword, it caught my attention. I feel the same way about high school.

Plot (9/10)
I’ve seen movies with plot lines like yours, but I’ve yet to read any fics like yours.

Originality (10/10)
This story is definitely original.

Flow (5/5)
It’s not too fast, and it’s not too slow. The perfect pace.

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (25/30)
You have amazing grammar and punctuation. Your spelling and vocabulary are good too. You had a few minor mistakes here and there, but not enough for me to go all grammar nazi on you.

Just know that when using ellipsis (…) you need to place a space afterwards. Example, “Wow… Nice comeback, douche.” Something like that.

Writing Style (10/10)
Your writing is readable and easy to comprehend.

Overall Enjoyment (8/10)
I don’t know much about Ga-in because I don’t really listen to Brown Eyed Girls, but your story definitely caught my interest. It caught interest enough for me to subscribe!

Total - 90/100

reviewer: Kakurine039
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