Summer Rain

Title (1/5)

This is a nice title but I don’t get how it relates to your oneshot—at all. Sure they met when it was raining but… I just don’t get it.

Poster & Background & Trailer (-/10)

Well, you have a picture where the poster is supposed to be… okay. The background is fine, I guess. I don’t think I’m going to take any points off here because it seems a bit weird to grade a picture that isn’t your poster.

Description & Foreword (1/10)

The description was not a description—I don’t even know what it is. You should have written a short summary of your story—tease us with what your story is about, give us an insight!

The foreword should not contain an author’s note only rather, I would suggest a quote that is relevant to your story, an excerpt or a prologue that leads to your story. There’s a reason why it’s called a foreword.

Plot (3/10)

I feel like there wasn’t a plot to this oneshot—it was just a one-night stand, they somewhat fall for each other but they aren’t together in the end. There was no beginning, middle and an end—where was the of this story? The resolution?

Originality (5/10)

I find this oneshot to be an original—the use of the OC being an unknown character is different but it was odd in a way.

Flow (4/5)

Normally, oneshots tend to have a fast flow because writers pretty much mashes the plot up in one go but I think the flow of the oneshot was perfect!

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (29/30)

There was only one error I found—it was how you placed your question marks. Why leave a space after the sentence then add the mark ? It’s incorrect.

I don’t have any other complaint.

Writing Style (9/10)

The writing style is nice—I have no other complaint about it.

Overall Enjoyment (5/10)

My enjoyment of the oneshot is half—didn’t enjoy as much because there wasn’t really a plot to the oneshot.

Total – 57/90

Reviewer: vangbby