calling aintyoufunny
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Title (3/5)
The title is not bad and it completely fits the story, but it’s not eye-catching and was something I would have
easily overlooked while searching for something to read.
Background/Poster/Trailer (/10)
Description & Foreword (5/10)
The description is okay, plain and simple and doesn’t give anything away. That’s sometimes hard to do
when the story is a one-shot.
Plot (10/10)
I really like the plot, it was good. Growing up, learning new things and experiencing emotions…real
good.
Originality (10/10)
Haven’t seen another story like this.
Flow (4/5)
The flow was good, but it was a little confusing at some parts. But I guess that was just part of the story,
the mysterious feeling.
Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (28/30)
There were one or two mistakes but nothing major.
Writing Style (10/10)
I love your writing style, it’s really good and nice to read.
Overall Enjoyment (10/10)
Eunhae, loved it. I especially liked the last two scenes, very touching.
Total Score: 80/90%
Congratz! Since you have 80% grade over 90% (with mistakes of 10%) , we're putting your story o\in the recommended list.
reviewed by: peacelovehugs
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