Going Crazy

a. Title (4/5) - I like the title but it sounds cliché. I've found fanfics with the same title as yours. But then again, I still like it and it's amazing that you were inspired by a song with the same name as the title. I really like stories that compare or inspired with a song. The title fits your story too since I think that stalker made Sang Rin going crazy, he even made me going crazy and so as the other readers. Ha-ha!

b. Poster & Background & Trailer (6/10) - Your poster is fine and your background too.  But it's not very eye-catching, but I'm glad you also made the poster on your own! I'm glad it's simple and it doesn't hurt my eye because you know, some does.

c. Description & Foreword (7/10) - Your description is great. I actually didn't read it first after clicking your story's link. I went directly to read the 1st chapter until the last. And when I finished it that's when I realized that the stalker was already told. It's Hoya? Her stalker? If I read it first I wouldn't be wondering at all. You didn't just put a teaser or a prologue... but seems like you already told us who the stalker is. That's just the problem I think. But still great story! LOL. And for the foreword, you described the characters well :). No problem with it. 

d. Plot (10/10) - I love it! It's creepy, and it scared the hell out of me! Thanks a lot to that; I've been reading none-creepy or horror fics until I read yours! I really like your plot anyways! I have nothing to say other than two thumbs up! Your story is a daebak!

e. Originality (9/10) - I'm not so sure if I've read stories with a plot the same to yours. Well except that there are fanfics with stalkers as the main or the antagonist. But for me, it's original since it's the first fanfic I read that shows that creepy stalker murderer. I love the way you made it romantic, horror, suspense, and thriller. I like the past of Dojoon's girlfriend and sister too, really creeps me out. I thought at first that the one buried alive was Sang Rin, well, my mistake! 

f. Flow (3/5) - I like the flow of your story. Not rush but a little slow I think - and a little rushed? Haha, well, both! At first, I find it confusing, but I understood later. It wasn't really slow too but a cliffhanger. I can't wait to find out who's the stalker.

g. Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (38/40) -Well I didn't really see anything wrong. Maybe just a few like -> she slid them up her herself  until she touched the blindfold covering her eyes. & also in Chapter 2 "Chinja, prove it me, Sung Ni." I think you forgot to write 'to' after 'me'. But that's no big deal. Your grammars and the way you write are just so good. I don't know what else is wrong, but I didn't really found anything more. Well, that's just me; I hope I didn't miss anything right? Well, keep up the good work! 

h. Writing Style (9/10) -I like the way you write the way you chose to italicized the scenes with the stalker and also the past.

Total = 86  /100 %

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