Double Life

a. Title (4/5) -I think it's just too common that's why I deducted it 1 point ;) 

b. Poster & Background & Trailer (8/10) - Your poster is simply awesome. Sorry, I have nothing else to say bout your poster but it could have been better in color since some of the pic doesn't match the background of the poster. Just my opinion though.

c. Description & Foreword (8/10)- Your description is just perfect , for me I guess. Your foreword is where you put your character description, and it makes me wonder who else is inside the story since you only put Lee Jin Ki (except that I know there's SHINee there). But it would be nice if there's at least a few description for the second main character... Lee Taemin right? :) Just my opinion. Over-all it's okay.

d. Plot (8/10) - Okay... so another ! I'm actually a big fan of (I really like Yunjae fics) and then there's Onew+Taemin, awesome pair. And to your plot, I find it very interesting. The fact that 3 guys from SHINee bullies Onew is very thrilling... the fact that Onew thought Taemin was a girl at first sight, I laughed at that. The fact that their relationship is growing and that Taemin knows Onew's big secret, I find it exciting especially Taemin being so feminine. Very creative story, Good Job!

e. Originality (6/10) - I have read lots of fics, but I think this is the first fic that talks about a guy with double life. But it's not really original since there are a lot of fics out there that talks about a girl having a double life, maybe a double life as a star and a nerd. What sounds original in your fic is that it's a fic ... But the main plot is seriously not original. Still, I like it 'cause you added some other (a little bit of) originality in yur fic.

f. Flow (3/5) -It was fine. Not too fast and very exciting for me.

g. Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (27/40) - I found a few or maybe many wrong grammars. Like in chapter 4, He seem really in pain but he try to denied it ... It should be 'He seems to be really in pain but he tries to deny it." 

I almost forgot , Jinki hyung stay on the same class with me.. (I almost forgot, Jinki hyung is in the same class with me."

I was happy that he were the same class with me (I was happy that he's in the same class with me.)

some  random guy drag me to sit beside him.. (some random guys dragged me to sit beside him.)

I found more than that, but I won't be typing them all. You just need to reread the mispellings, punctuations and grammars and your fic would be perfect.

h. Writing Style (9/10) - Your writing style is neat , just like a few of fics I've read. It's easier for readers to read fics like yours actually, a few spaces ... then bold the thoughts of the person's P.O.V. . I have no problem with it, great writing style.

Total = 73/100 %

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