Echoes of Spring

Title (5/5)

If I had seen this title while searching for something to read, I definitely would have been
interested. It looks sweet but has a story to it and it’s not a common title.

Poster/Background/Trailer (9/10)

The poster is sweet and simple and I absolutely love the picture of Krystal in it. The only thing
that I would change is the second faded picture of Minho that’s right under Krystal.

Description & Foreword (10/10)

Both the description and foreword are really good and captivated my attention. You wrote
something nice and enough to want me to continue reading, and most people don’t do that.

Plot (10/10)

Oh gosh, I’m not what sure to say here. That was honestly one of the sweetest stories I’ve seen
in so long. I love how Minho progressed through the story and got some real friends, and how
Krystal was a soul that got back to her body. At some parts I was worried that Minho would
forget about her, but he found her in the end and that was awesome!

Originality (10/10)

Every part of this story is definitely original. I mean, I’ve seen several stories around where a
boy/girl meets someone and they’re a ghost or a lost soul who’s died, but this is so much better
since you made Krystal not dead. Anyone can make a basic plot sound absolutely amazing, and
you’ve proved that.

Flow (5/5)

Perfect.

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (27/30)

I did find a few mistakes, but just silly little ones that I wouldn’t be able to find if I was looking
for them.

Writing Style (10/10)

I can’t say anything here, just that you write beautifully; and that’s not a compliment I usually
give.

English is your second language? I honestly cannot believe that! You write better than half the
people on the site who speak English as their first language! Amazing. I’m going to refer people
to you when they use the excuse that English is their second language if they write bad.

Overall Enjoyment (10/10)

I LOVED this. I’m not normally one to read Minho and Krystal stories, because usually they
are really dumb and pointless, but I absolutely love how you portrayed everyone in this story.
Minho is withdrawn at first and cold, but he isn’t a stuck up like most people write him.
I love that you made him open up and befriend people. Krystal and Jessica were written the best
I’ve ever seen them in any story. You did write them like ty es, but as sisters who love
each other. I think that this story is so amazing because it doesn’t focus on love and romance, but
friendship. And that’s the best kind of story any could ever hope to write.

Total Score: 96/100%

Congratz! Your story will be on the recommended list! ^ ^

reviewed by: peacelovehugs