Our Accidental Baby

a. Title (3/5)
-Your title is quite common among AFF but your story is different from others in AFF. It sounded interesting and I think if I needed a fanfic to read it would be yours.

b. Poster & Background & Trailer (9/10)
-You poster fits the story well
-I did not gave you a 10/10 because I did not like the colours because its black and white but it’s still okay

c. Description & Foreword (7/10)
-When I read your description and Foreword it sound interesting and you description and foreword are the almost as other AFF users and it will say that somebody will disappear as she has the child and somebody will find her and they will to be together again.

d. Plot (10/10)
-Plot is great as the description and foreword looks interesting and fun to read.

e. Originality (8/10)
-Story is creative

f. Flow (5/5)
-flow was great not too fast and not too slow.

g. Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (21/30)
-I gave you a 25 because you don’t really have spelling mistakes and punctuation.
-Your grammar and vocabulary was alright but not that great just in the middle .

h. Writing Style (10/10)
-I like your writing style so not much of that.

i. Overall Enjoyment (8/10)
-Your first few chapters were a tiny bit slow.
-I enjoy reading you story and i am waiting for chapters from you!

Total: 81/100%

P.S. This is my first review and I tried my best to give you a great review.You are amazing author and Have a Nice Day!

reviewed by: KpopLover756