Dark Streets of Seoul

Title (5/5)

I like the title. The only thing is that ‘Of’ doesn’t need to be capitalized.

Poster/Background/Trailer (9/10)

The poster is good and it’s great that you have a matching background. The only thing I would
have changed about the poster is having a bit of Seoul streets somewhere on it to give it a more
badass vibe that would have completely looked awesome.

Description & Foreword (4/10)

Your description was no good. You have way too much written and you pretty much spoil
the entire story. There are too many characters written right there, I think you just write that
Sungjong has been held captive and escaped into the dark streets of Seoul or something like that.
Don’t give out too much information or else the mystic vibe gets ruined. Also, you shouldn’t
write that he loses his memory, let the readers find out themselves.

Secondly, an author’s note should be in the foreword.

Plot (5/10)

It is an interesting plot, but it didn’t hold my attention well.

Originality (5/10)

I have seen two stories exactly like this where someone is being held captured and escapes and
people are being sent out to catch them and all that, but different characters were used.

Flow (3/5)

You jump around a lot. It’s one thing after another without stopping and giving explanation.

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (30/30)

Everything was good.

Writing Style (5/10)

While you do write good description and overall basic writing skills, the story is still very
amateur and lacks tone. You gave it a dark title with a dark poster, giving readers the idea that
they are about to read something so amazing and entrancing, but it’s not.

This story was so awkward and I had to force myself to continue reading it. None of the
characters fit the story theme and everything is just so dull, there’s no excitement in it.

Overall Enjoyment (0/10)

I did not enjoy reading this.

Total Score: 66/100%

reviewed by: peacelovehugs