Heroes of the Earth

Title (5/5)

I liked the title, it gave off a supernatural feel to it. Just reading the title makes me want to read more.

Poster & Background & Trailer (9/10)

The poster was simple and matched the mood perfectly. It's not too crowded and most of the pictures are in HQ. I do think it could have used a little more.. pizzazz? If that's the word. Haha, but yeah it seems like it's lacking a bit.

Description & Foreword (8/10) 

I loved the description! It was very mysterious, and it instantly caught my attention. Especially with that last line, "and now they must save it". Absolutely stunning. The way  you worded it was amazing. Usually I don't like when people describe the characters in the foreword or description, but I found it was necessary to describe them here.
Although, maybe you could have added just a bit more to make your description perfect. Maybe add something to make it more mysterious, add suspense to the story and make the reader curious as to what would happen next.

Plot (10/10) 

The plot was extraordinary. I absolutely love supernatural fics, so I was expecting a good, descriptive, eye-catching plot. And yours met all of my standards for a good plot. I found nothing was cliched, and as I was reading, I was so engaged that I honestly didn't want to stop. That's what I look for in a plot, and I'm glad yours didn't disappoint me.

Originality (10/10)

I found nothing was cliche, and everything seemed original and unique.

Flow (5/5) 

The flow was good, it didn't move to fast or too slow.

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (20/30)

I didn't find any grammar mistakes, although, as I always say, proofread your chapters just in case you have a mistake. Your vocabulary was mind-blowing, and you used descriptive words. It really did paint a picture in my mind as I was reading.