Blue Snow

a. Title (4/5)
Hmm.. I'm not sure about the title. I mean, it caught my attention. And when I saw it, I automatically thought, 'Oh. It's probably a sad story.' - - And it was. So.. it gave off a good impression, for me.

b. Poster & Background & Trailer (7/10)
The poster was a bit.. unappealing. And I know you weren't the one who made the poster.. but you should be careful on who makes your posters. It's one of the ingredients to an eye-catching story. 

c. Description & Foreword (7/10)
I wasn't very excited to read it, to be honest. But it did keep me wondering a little. 

d. Plot (9/10)
It was nice. It made me feel a bit sad.. and I felt pity for Yoona. You portrayed the plot well. 

e. Originality (9/10)
Something about this seems all so.. familiar. Haha, I still thought it was pretty original. 

f. Flow (5/5)
You did a good job. You didn't explain everything too fast, (which a lot of people do), and it was enjoyable, but most importantly, UNDERSTANDABLE. It didn't confuse me at all. 

g. Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (30/30)
I didn't see one mistake. Unless I missed it.. oh well.

h. Writing Style (9/10)
I like it. Whenever a new person was saying something, you started a new paragraph/stanza. Keep it up.

i. Overall Enjoyment (8/10)
Hmm.. I would say I liked it. I didn't love it, but I did enjoy it. Your writing style is good, your grammar & mechanics are perfect. 

Total - 88/100
reviewer: mooncake
You deserved it! B+! :]