My Brother's 'Brother'

Title (3/5)

Actually, it's a spectacular kind of title and simple but gives me a feeling that its commonly used. However, I didn’t get it that well (at first). Maybe, because I'm slow in understanding titles? The question was who is his brother's brother?  As far as I know, the leads are Seunghyun, Siwon and Yunho and Seunghyun and Siwon are brothers. So, what does it mean when it says his brother's brother? It's was quite confusing when at first I thought that brother is actually another brother of his brother. Well, not until I found out its actually an older brother who is not blood related. Uhrg. That took me so long to realize that.

Poster & Background & Trailer (9/10)

Absolute loved it. Just like in the story, Yunho's the mysterious type so in the poster, he's also mysterious! I can't even see his face, but it looks cool anyway. Simple yet elegant.

Description & Foreword (8/10)

Description and Foreword were both interesting and well-written.

I like how you write the foreword. Just by reading it, I got intrigued. The atmosphere in the story sounds so refreshing and quiet but it’s actually nice. It gives me excitement inside me, wondering how on Earth Yunho and Seunghyun would fall in love and how Seunghyun suddenly kissed Yunho. It was romantic.

Plot (7/10)

I've read three chapters only so I haven't seen any conflicts or twist in the story yet. All I know is that two people who are roommates will fall in love with each other. That kind of plot is actually common especially to those readers who explores and reads too many stories. The plot isn't that fun and unique, but it was fine.

The small talks between the two is nice, although sometimes I wished they had more interaction with each other. I understand why there's only small talks as of now since there's only three chapters but I think this is just too slow unless there's chapter 4 and so on already.

Anyway, I love how you portray the main characters: Seunghyun and Yunho. These two are really different from each other so I like it that way. I'm hoping that you'd update so your readers would find out more about Yunho and Seunghyun.

Originality (6/10)

This is a good story but there's only three chapters so I only observed a few creativities.

Flow (5/5)

Since there's only 3 chapters and usually when there's only three chapters it’s a little bit slow. I guess people will have to wait for the next chapters and then suddenly find the flow perfectly paced.

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (28/30)

Almost everything is perfect but there are some errors I found, that includes the use of punctuation.  Anyway, I love the way you describe how things look like and everything. Two thumbs up for that!

Writing Style (9/10)

I like it!

Overall Enjoyment (8/10)

I enjoyed this. The story is exhilarating. The way it’s slow made me eager to read more. My curiosity continues to rise up until now.

Total Score: 84/100%

reviewed by: sususco123