Merry Go Round

Title (5/5)

I love the title and it really goes well with the story and poster.

Poster/Background/Trailer (9/10)

I really like the poster. The colors are my favorite, soft and sweet and they fit perfectly with
everyone’s expression. Only problem I have is whose picture you used for Min Ra. That’s IU,
right? You shouldn’t use well-known people in place for your OC. But if I’m incorrect, just
ignore that.

Description & Foreword (8/10)

Very nice, and interesting. Only thing I have to say is try not to put so many line breaks in it.

Plot (7/10)

You have a nice plot going on, but seeing as you only have five chapters I can’t really give you a
good review.

Originality (8/10)

I don’t really read EXO stories stories nor do I normally read OC stories, so I guess this is could
be considered original.

Flow (5/5)

Perfect! The story’s pace is just right, not too slow and not too rushed.

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (27/30)

I did find a few small mistakes, but they’re not worth going back through and finding.

Writing Style (10/10)

I love your writing style, and I don’t say that to just anyone.

Overall Enjoyment (5/10)

It was a good story for the most part, but it’s not something I would actually read on my own
time. EXO stories don’t interest me and your OC girl is a pansy.

Total Score: 84/100%

reviewed by: peacelovehugs