Vir Incorruptus A Priori

Title (3/5)

Interesting title, even though I have no idea what it even means. Honestly, I don’t particularly like stories
that have titles in different languages because it really doesn’t look good because most of the time the
story doesn’t live up to the nifty looking title. But yours does!

Poster/Background/Trailer (10/10)

I don’t even know why, but I’m in love with the poster. No offense, but it’s really nothing special
and definitely not considered amazing, but I love it. It has this cross vibe to it, between Shakespeare,
futuristic, and Alice in Wonderland. Don’t laugh at me, but the title looked a bit weird (the font) like it
had some redish and blue tinge to it and I don’t even know what convinced me, but I put on a pair of 3D
glasses and it popped out at me.

Love it.

Description & Foreword (7/10)

The description certainly grabbed my attention…until I read the pairings with Sekyung. That was a huge
turn off. I really don’t like her, never have and never will (not because she dated Jjong, though, I’m not
bias). But, I don’t let that sort of thing get in the way of my reviewing.

Anyways, normally for a description written like that, saying things like ‘this is a tale’ or ‘you will see
how’ are a tell tale sign that it’s going to be an amateur story, but I guess it kind of fits with the theme/
vibe you’ve got going on.

Plot (9/10)

You have an interesting plot going on and I don’t know how to describe it. So I’ll just give you good
marks.

Originality (10/10)

Definitely haven’t seen anything like this around!

Flow (4/5)

Pretty good.

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (28/30)

Everything was good, but there are a few mistakes regarding dialogue but I only saw it a few times in the
beginning of the story. Just make sure you end with a punctuation mark and all that fancy stuff.

Writing Style (9/10)

Great writing style! You have such an interesting style and I love it, it’s quite amusing.

Overall Enjoyment (6/10)

It was interesting and kept my attention, and I loved the style of the story. But it’s not something that I
would willingly read on my own.

Total Score: 86/100%

Congratz! Your story will be on the recommended list!

reviewed by: peacelovehugs