My Stalking Heart

a. Title (5/5) -Awesome title. Very cute, and fits your story very well.

b. Poster & Background & Trailer (9/10) -Awesome poster! Love the background and the way it was edited. It looks cute and light. I just like it though, simple but beautiful in my eyes.

c. Description & Foreword (7/10)-Great description, it's just that not enough. Your foreword is not enough too, you should have added characters or maybe a prologue. The description surely made readers curious but not enough.

d. Plot (4/10) -When I saw the title, I thought it would be something very interesting, and cute... and funny. But well, it was fine! It's cute but I guess I was not very interested and I found it a bit boring since the plot sounds like I've read it before. He-he. But maybe that's just me.

e. Originality (4/10) -Sounds cliché. It's not very original. Not really new since a bit common. Oh and not very enjoyable. Maybe if you add more creativity and not make it a bit boring.

f. Flow (2/5) -It's slow, and that disappoints me. It was partly boring too but I enjoyed the part where Sica went to Changmin and Changmin was saying he's the one when Sica fell asleep. And the part where Seorin and Changmin first met. It was fun, but only for a while.

g. Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary 32/40) -

Your grammar is simple and good and I don't think I found any other mistakes like mispellings. Maybe the punctuations but you can just recheck them. It's cool you also added Korean words.

h. Writing Style (9/10) -Simple and easy to understand. Glad you didn't use deep words. Ha-ha. Usually writers would use deep and hard words that I don't even know what it is, but yours is just simple and straight to the point. Good!

Total = 72/100 %

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