Winter Child, Summer Child

Title (3/5)
I like the title but I didn't see the connection with the story, it was just explained about two characters. If that was what you want to explained I also didn't see it on the story. I didn't see the characters you wanted to describe.

Poster and Background (6/10)
Too bad you just posted the poster for the foreword, the background is fine.

Descript and foreword (7/10)
The way you described about the characters, I like it. It's good.

Plot (6/10)
I like the plot. it goes fine. For the first time I was thinking about 2min love story but guess I was wrong. I think you should make second POV. it was all Minho POV. the readers might wantt to know what the other characters think and I was bored on some parts.( the parts when taemin appeared)

Originality (5/10)
I read many fiction like this, but yours different.you should improved the plot. Until chapter 11 it was all good.

Flow (3/5)

It was fine.

Grammar (28/30)
You did a good job with your grammar and tenses !

Writing style (7/10)
You described everything well.

Enjoyment (6/10)
I enjoyed the story but I feel like your story was a sad story, Taemin who couldn't do anything get what he wants when Minho couldn't get anything he wants.

Total- 71/100%

reviewed by: Mikayla