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It Started with a Rumor

a. Title (5/5)
Matched very well with the plot. 


b. Poster & Background & Trailer (9/10)
The background was cute and simple. I liked the poster.

c. Description & Foreword (10/10)
It was cool & it really caught my eye, I was even excited to read the first chapter.

d. Plot (9/10)
Not to complicated, it's good. 

e. Originality (8/10)
I've seen some other fics like this, but this one was more realistic.


f. Flow (5/5)
Writer's block? Psh. No way. Each chapter was un-wrapped perfectly, and things didn't go to fast, nor did they go too slow. Just a perfect pace.

g. Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (25/30)
Like your said, it's your grammar. Also a little bit on your punctuation & capitalization.


h. Writing Style (9/10)
This is probably the only "You" story that I actually like.


i. Overall Enjoyment (10/10)
I subscribed. So that means you deserve the 10. 

Total - 90/100

reviewer: mooncake
I seriously like it. ^~^ I even, myself, subscribed to the story. I actually smiled and laughed a little at some parts. It's very imaginable and I can visualize it easily in my head. The way you portrayed each member, as a fellow EXOtic, was on-spot & accurate. Keep going. The story is doing great so far! Fighting!

 

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nyarth
#1
Chapter 159: Wth man its a nice and quite detailied review however its obvious that you were led by your personal feelings for the characters and genre
500sunny500
#2
Out of curiosity, is this review shop on hiatus or completely closed (as in inactive)?
Charybdis #3
Author : Charybdis

Story Title: Skinny

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/273679

Choose your reviewer: Anyone

Thank you very much!
wintress
#4
Author : wintress

Story Title: Reflect the Storm

Story Link: http://bit.ly/1aqF4Vf

Choose your reviewer: Anybody who has time.

Anything else you want us to know? I like cheese. But in all seriousness - I don't think so?
faylieannlee
#5
Author : faylieannlee

Story Title: Oh My Devil!

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/420053

Choose your reviewer: 8symmetrical8

Anything else you want us to know? : None at the moment. :)
RayLCh #6
Author : LostInThought-_-

Story Title: Just Living

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/369626/just-living-chaerin-kryber-yulber-jessber-love

Choose your reviewer: Anybody ^_^

Anything else you want us to know?: New writer and thank you in advance ^_^
-XotichlLovee- #7
Author : MaipaLee

Story Title: Promises

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/321505/promises-etc-infinite-joo-woohyun-you-ilhoon

Choose your reviewer: Anybody. =]

Anything else you want us to know? : Nope not for now. =]
ForeverYourShawol #8
Author : ForeverYourShawol

Story Title: She's Like a Prince

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/340895/she-s-like-a-prince-comedy-fluff-highschool-romance-kai-shortstory-amberfx

Choose your reviewer: mooncake

Anything else you want us to know? I'm just starting off on this fanfic and I what to know if it's doing well so far! ^^ It's a romantic comedy that will have a lot of fluff later on.
deductionmaniac
#9
Author : kim_kyuhyunELF13

Story Title: Insanely Insane

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/203278/insanely-insane-iusinger-jieun-kevin-ukiss-ren

Choose your reviewer: Kakurine039

Anything else you want us to know? uhmm .. thanks in advance ^^
dolittle123
#10
Author : dolitle123

Story Title: The White Princess - How Taemin Changed My Life

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/49339

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Anything else you want us to know?
Be harsh as you'd like. It would be motivating for me as I really want to finish the story. T_T