Goodbye, forever.

a. Title (1.5/5)

It's common and it didn't catch my attention. 

b. Poster & Background & Trailer (8/10)

It's a light background and I think anyone who loves sad or drama story would like the poster. It's all perfect for the mood of your story. There is just no title in the poster so I deducted your score.

c. Description & Foreword (8/10)

It was short but it tells what we readers needed to know and it made us wonder about the big things that are about to happen. It's only a description but I love it, such a short foreword with full of wonders. 

d. Plot (8/10)

It's really a sad story and it's not very common but realistic. It can happen in real life or maybe this happened in real life (including Hara and Junhyung). The plot is really interesting for me, it made me cry and I could feel how HyunA felt when Junhyung broke up with her. It's like I was there being dumped. Just some parts are too common, but I love the way you made this story, it's so sad and emotional.

e. Originality (7/10)

I cant say this is really original. Since it's a realistic one, so probably others might have made other stories like this but I haven't seen one yet. 

f. Flow (3/5)

It is good although a few scenes bored me to death! I still like it, everything is so heartbreaking, so exclusive and exciting. Sometimes it's too long and boring so I deducted your points ...

g. Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (27/30)

I didn't really see something wrong with yours, but maybe I think a few but I haven't wrote it down to recheck it.  But I saw a few like using words from past tense and then later it was present tense. 

h. Writing Style (10/10)

You described everything well. The heartbreaks, the death... Well, all so descriptive and sounded so real. I like your style.


i. Overall Enjoyment (9/10) -

I enjoyed this so much because it made me cry. It was so real for me and even though I dont know the characters so much, it made me love them by reading your story. Ahhh, so heart warming but sad. 

Total Score: 81.5/100%