Kiss the Cook

Title (5/5)

Very interesting and unique, haven’t seen one like it.

Poster/Background/Trailer (7/10)

I totally want to give you full marks because all three of them look so so y and delicious. However, the
poster was a little plain; it needs something to spice it up and give it flavor.

But this is a story, correct? When I saw the poster and saw Hyori on it (that’s her, right?) I thought it
was going to be a heteroual story and generally I don’t read those and would have gone to go look for
something else. But since Jaejoong and Rain were so fine…I just had to see what this was about.

Description & Foreword (10/10)

They were both good but I was a little confused on one part. Is Jihoon married or divorced or what?
Because you wrote that he had a beautiful wife…but in all, this is a story. I won’t take any points off
though, because all in all it caught my attention and made me want to keep reading.

Plot (5/10)

Although one chapter is hardly enough to even get credit for this, the starting idea is rather interesting
and I can see that it’s going to turn out to be something enticing. But since it’s only one chapter, I’m only
giving you half marks.

Originality (10/10)

The random pairing of characters and the idea of a y cook…brilliant. I absolutely love stuff like this,
hardly anyone has enough balls to break away from the status quo and make their own pairings and
storyline with characters that are rarely ever seen together. Kudos for you for doing your own thing!

Flow (5/5)

Not too fast, not too slow and you have everything in a good pace without rushing and leaving out details
or putting too many in.

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (30/30)

No problems here!

Writing Style (10/10)

You really have an amazing writing style! Long paragraphs, nice dialogue, proper sentences…everything
that I like to see in a story. The description and details were written perfectly and the emotional
connecting was amazing. They felt like real people instead of characters with fake personalities with the
names of the idols.

Overall Enjoyment (9/10)

Loved it! Even though it’s only one chapter and generally that’s hard to give a review, your story has so
much potential to it, I look forward to seeing what comes to play.

Total score: 91/100%

Congratz! Your story will be on the recommended list!

reviewed by: peacelovehugs