10,000 Years With Love

Title (5/5)

I absolutely love the title! It’s very unique and gives off this aura that makes the reader know that
they’re about to read something really good. There is one thing that I think is a bit off, is it really
with Love or shouldn’t it be of Love?

Poster/Background/Trailer (8/10)

The poster is sweet and simple. But I the overall design I’ve seen too many times, the circle with
two people in the middle.

Description & Foreword (10/10)

Definitely made me want to read more.

Plot (8/10)

The plot was really good, but some parts were a bit confusing and I kept getting lost and having
to re-read parts.

Originality (9/10)

This is something that not many people even dare to attempt because it’s so…hard to write
about. I’ve only seen one other story with a similar plot but your story was definitely your own!

Flow (3/5)

I think you moved a little bit too fast and jumped around too much, which makes it a little
confusing for some people, like me.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Vocabulary (30/30)

Perfect!

Writing Style (8/10)

You have a very nice writing style and it definitely improved from the last story that I reviewed
from you. Everything is written so nicely, but you could tie in scenery and background a bit
more and add in some more thoughts for the characters.

Overall Enjoyment (10/10)

I love it.

Total Score: 91/100%

Congratz! Your story will be on the recommended list!

reviewed by: peacelovehugs