Review: Love Flourshing in War     Review for Exoticbabylove       Title and Story link:   Love Flourshing in War (Reviewed with only 2 chapters)       Title:    Great title used and was eye catching and definitely relatable to the storyline           Poster:    The poster used was perfect because the pictures used was pleasing to the eyes and extremely relevant to the story.           Description and Foreword:   Description and foreword is neat and it was better than yesterday! Great job!   (This is what I would write, changing some words but I'm in no position to ask you to follow. Just trying to help ^^)       ''I can never dance again, so what's the point on living? How could fate be this cruel to me, by taking dancing away from me?'' Kai flared up.       ''If you think that fate is cruel to you, what about other people who is born with physical disadvantages that couldn't even walk and let alone dance. Don't give up on yourself!''           Storyline/Plot:   The plot is extremely unique and different, I love it! There isn't a lot of authors who are brave enough to write about war but you did! Good thinking for such a great plot.           Characters:   Characters that you choose are extremely suitable for your story, especially the pictures used in the poster. Since you're only in chapter two, it's acceptable that you haven't develop the characters well but I hope you could start having more in depth information about the main characters. eg More background or flashback of the characters past, their family, their personality and what they stands for etc           Language(Grammar,Vocabulary etc):   There are quite a lot of minor spellings mistake and sometimes the sentences don't make any sense to me.       For example:    The bloody battle when on like there was no tomorrow. (The bloody battle went on and on like there was no tomorrow.)       Vocabulary was, however, expressive and it was describe well but I would consider using more common phrases for there's some sentences that was rather confusing.  Another thing to look out for is repeating or having too many sentences while you could summarize them better.       For example:    Suddenly, two burly men appeared, one holding a katana and one holding an old-fashioned gun. He smirked and