Review for azn_angel242       Title and Story Link:   Through Thick and Think (Completed with 15 chapters)       Title: (7/10)   I didn't quite like the title because of it being a bit too long and it didn't sound interesting  at first because you couldn't relate to the story but you still manage to get marks because it relates to the story well for Jessica's and Taecyeon's relationship and also it's because the title was easy to find and remember.           Overall Appearance: (10/10)   The poster was amazing, the layout of the story was neat and overall appearance is excellent! Full marks!           Description and Foreword: (7/10)   The description was clear-cut and good. You could roughly know the story's plot with just eh the few sentences that you wrote for your description. I just feel that at the description and foreword page, the description was a little out of point. The main focus in the story is that Taecyeon cheated on Jessica and she is confuse between Kris (her best friend) and Taecyeon (husband) but the description was more heavily focus on true love and differences on loving your best friend of husband which could be considered a little out of point. Under Kris's description, I feel that replacing children with young would sound a little more logical but it's not a big issue :)   He still has a major crush on her since they were children and hopes to one day just tell her how he felt.    (He still has a major crush on her ever since they were young and hopes that one day he could tell her how he feels about her)       The foreword, on the other hand, was focus correctly and was well-written, great job!           Plot: (15/20)    I couldn't actually say that I haven't read a story with two man falling in love with the same girl or a story about a best friend secretly in love with the same girl or a plot where the man cheated on her etc. You lose a bit of marks because of originality but you did well by having complications to the story. Complications such as to when she is pregnant at the wrong time, that Kris confessed to her that he loves her and this made the plot much more interesting. The ending wasn't a surprise, but it was a good and happy ending where everyone is happy.        What affects me the most is that the at some point, the story feels unrealistic. Firstly, the tricking Taecyeon about Nickhun sleeping with Jessica. Shouldn't he throw a fit or an argument instead of letting time pass by and not getting mad at either Nickhun or Jessica. Secondly, the misunderstanding. I know that it's suppose to be a misunderstanding but couldn't he just force Jessica to listen to him or text her before she fly off to America. Instead, he didn't manage to tell everyone that it's a misunderstanding until he reached America. If this matters a lot and it's just a misunderstanding, he should be putting in more effort to telling Jessica. A more realistic view would probably be that Taecyeon get to explained that it's a misunders