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Review: Beautiful Boy     Review for ---3---       Title and Story link:   Beautiful Boy (Completed one-shot)           Title: (9/10)   The title is good and relate to the story well, however it was too common and when I search 'Beautiful Boy' into the search bar, your story didn't appeared on the first page.            Poster: (5/10)   The poster was slightly messy and it wasn't pleasing to see. The pictures used wasn't clear or in high defination, the background picture of snow made the poster look muddy, the font used for the title in the poster was untidy and the 'y' in 'boy' was cut. Lastly the quote below the title in the poster was barely visible and I couldn't read it without squinting my eyes.           Description and Foreword: (15/20)   There wasn't any excerpt of the story in this page at all, this would discourage readers to read because we don't know the content of the story. Adding a excerpt or a small description of the story will be better and people will be more keen to read on. The author's note should be place in the foreword, together with the credits, that way you could add description of the story in 'Description'.           Storyline/Plot: (17/20)   The plot was rather confusing for me, I feel that it's lacking the background story and complications. The whole conclusion of the storyline is that Sehun is a Beautiful Boy and that he made money by selling his body. The pl
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babyblueunicorn
#1
Chapter 179: Saw it now, I am so sorry for all the misspelling and all... That specific story was written before I had any experience here.... LOL

Yes, I would love to help you with your Spanish homework.
Claro, me encantaría ayudate con tu tarea de español cuando la escuela empiece. ¿De dónde eres? ¿En qué grado estas? ¡Háblame por mensaje privado!
hermeh #2
read my fic? :)