Review for flamzfox       Title and Story Link:   Tao and His Eleven (Ongoing, reviewed with 15 chapters)       Title: (9/10)   The title relates to the plot well and is interesting. if I would to chance upon this story's title, I would definitely be curious enough to find out more.        Poster: (8/10)   The supporting picture of EXO at the bottom was slightly messy because of the blurring effect for the background/people. Secondly, the colour and size of the title and the quote didn't stand out enough. However overall, it's still well coordinated and look good!       Description and Foreword: (18/20)   I was so impressed by your description and foreword! Your description was catchy, professional and it definitely caught my attention! The page was organize, neat and pleasing to read! However, you didn't manage to score full marks because I felt that it will be better if there's some sort of map/introduction of the characters and the foreword wasn't the highlight of the story (in my opinion). For the introduction of characters, you could describe them and maybe have picture of Kai with D.O and the rest pointing towards Tao etc.        Storyline/Plot: (18/20)    I felt that the plot of the story is still going a little too slow but it's still acceptable because you're developing the characters while revealing some part of Tao and D.O's background/past. You could try to speed up the development of the story and have an estimation on when and how you want the story to end. Till chapter 15, the end