Review for Stephy0823       Title and Story Link:   The pain behind his tears (Ongoing, reviewed with 16 chapters)       Title: (8/10)   I felt that the title was too long and secondly, it wasn't in capital. For eg. The pain behind his tears (The Pain Behind His Tears) For the length of the title, it could be easily summaries to make it into a idea title length but it's not necessary to change the title now since you've already in the 16th chapter :)           Poster: (7/10)   The poster was quite painful to see in my opinion with the effect going on every second. I actually adore this poster a lot, it was classic, simple and relate well to the story but the title wasn't clear. It was in red, italic and slanted. WIth the effect and the title, it was very hard to admire this amazing poster.            Description and Foreword: (19/20)   The page was organize and extremely clear cut. It was an amazing job that you manage to write a great description for the story that people will want to read on and yet still manage to be concise with your words. The way you line your characters up with a picture and a small description was really good! The quote was memorable too!           Storyline/Plot: (16/20)    At first I was expecting a lot from this story because the plot could really be interesting and engaging but I was disappointed after reading until chapter 16. All along it was just about Minho and the father bullying and torturing Taemin. Until chapter 16, the storyline and plot should already start to develop. For example, how did Taemin's mother died and how long is Taemin going to suf