>I Love Myungsoo Like A Long Song?

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    Review for -natsukim {Second Review}       Title and Story Link:   I Love Myungsoo Like A Love Song? Hell No! (Completed story with 24 chapters)       Title: (6/10)   The title wasn't original nor was it relevant to the story. At some point, the title does make sense but it isn't the highlight of the story and the title have resemblace to Selena gomez's song - Love song. Secondly, it was too long and 'Hell No' was slightly informal too.            Poster: (7/10)   The title in the poster was hard to read and only 'Hell No' could be easily seen.            Description and Foreword: (17/20)   The description and foreword page was slightly contradicting. First, in the description it says that you don't love Myungsoo like a love song (because of 'Hell No!') but in the foreword it contradicted by saying that you still love him. Foreword's language wasn't quite grammatically correct and the sentence structure wasn't complete.   Foreword:   Being his girlfriend is a nightmare (Being Myungsoo's girlfriend is a nightmare)   Never give me any single gift (He never get me any gifts and never wish me a happy birthday)   Never wish me on my birthday   And never kiss me (Lastly, he never shower me with kisses or hugs)       But, I still love him       Storyline/Plot: (16/20)    The plot was more towards a cute story instead of having a meaningful story. It just a short story about dating Myungsoo and about his plan to surprise you at the end. I love the complications of getting jealous, suzy, being a Howon's fan and Wo
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babyblueunicorn
#1
Chapter 179: Saw it now, I am so sorry for all the misspelling and all... That specific story was written before I had any experience here.... LOL

Yes, I would love to help you with your Spanish homework.
Claro, me encantaría ayudate con tu tarea de español cuando la escuela empiece. ¿De dónde eres? ¿En qué grado estas? ¡Háblame por mensaje privado!
hermeh #2
read my fic? :)