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Review for jessie14       Title and Story Link:   Love is Attitude (Completed one-shot)       Title: (8/10)   The title relates to the story well and was completely in syn with all of the other one-shots in the collection.       Poster: (7/10)   The poster felt incomplete and wasn't impressive but it's acceptable since it's just a one-shot in a one-shot collection it's already amazing enough that you took the time to make them! Impressive! (The other one-shots posters look prettier and better though, still it's good enough ^____^)           Description and Foreword: (17/20)   Since it's a one-shot collection, if you don't mind, I'm taking the foreword/description page for this. The page was neat, organize and interesting. For your description, the one sentence was alluring and readers will be interested to read on and find out more about it. The page was very well planned and your efforts paid off. I love how you place a pictures for each segment of the page for example, the welcome have a banner and more.  The credits was really neat too! Great job!           Storyline/Plot: (15/20)    In my opinion, the plot was developing too quickly. Especially when she change from Baekhyun to Luhan! I mean in just a short period she just decide to change just because Baekhyun couldn't rehearse waltz with her. I felt that the reason wasn't enough and it could be better. Perhaps it's because she like Luhan or could it be
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babyblueunicorn
#1
Chapter 179: Saw it now, I am so sorry for all the misspelling and all... That specific story was written before I had any experience here.... LOL

Yes, I would love to help you with your Spanish homework.
Claro, me encantaría ayudate con tu tarea de español cuando la escuela empiece. ¿De dónde eres? ¿En qué grado estas? ¡Háblame por mensaje privado!
hermeh #2
read my fic? :)