Review: Bijoux Jewels     Review for applecyanide       Title and Story Link:   Bijoux Jewels (Ongoing, reviewed with 6 chapters)       Title: (7/10)   The title wasn't interesting enough for me. If I would to chance upon this story, the title would made me ignore it. Even though the title relates to the story, it didn't make readers want to read on.            Poster: (6/10)   I don't like the poster because it's lacking in most of the main characters (Nuhyun, Ahsa and Bijou), it didn't look professional and the title didn't stand out enough. I would recommend you to try to request a poster from a good graphic shop instead :))       Description and Foreword: (16/20)   The description sounded a little too typical but it did draw my attention and I love how you added the defination of 'Bijou' because I wouldn't have known the meaning behind her(OC) name. The page looks neat and simple and it's good because you didn't reveal too much about the characters or about Jongin to keep the readers curious as they have to read the story to find out by them self.       Plot: (17/20)    At the first glance, I was dreading to read the story because from the description it sounded one of those typical stories but I was glad that it was made differently! Even though it's still a rather simple plot with Bijou falling in love with Nuhyun who's taken, I love how the story also revolves around the competition of Baekhyun and Jongin! I couldn't stop reading right after I start in chapter one, great job! I would recommend you to have some plot twists to have the story be more original and more complicated!           Language: (19/20)   I'm so in love and impress by your writing style! Your writing style captivates me so much that I couldn't stop reading at one point! Your range of vocabulary was strong, you are good with sentence structure and your language was impressive! The only thing you could improve on your punctuation.   For example:    1. ''T-three months? And you didn't even have to heart to tell me?'', Bijou asked disbelieving.   - "T-Three months? And you didn't even have the heart to tell me?'' Bijou asked in disbelief.