Review for blackwolf       Title and Story Link:   Fighters Of Guns & Bullets (Ongoing, reviewed with 6 chapters)       Title: (6/10)   The title was original and relates to the story well but I feel that it wasn't interested enough. If I could chance upon the story, I might give it a miss because it didn't sound interesting. It was too long and I feel that there's a ton of other titles that you could use for the story, it's just isn't a good title.       Poster: (5/10)   The poster's theme suits angst but I felt that there was too many things going on. The main characters should be in similar size and the main character, Chole, was too small to be seen at the side. The title should also stand out by having it in a contrasting colour in the poster.       Description and Foreword: (13/20)   I actually really like your description but I feel that it could be phrase better to make it more interesting.   -A Alot of people know not to wonder the streets alone at night. Many things can happen, from car accidents, robber or gang up on. Everyone knows to especially watch out for this alleyways. Lots of stuff goes on here, and the town are aware of all the dangers that lurks in the darkness.   (A lot of people know that you shouldn't wonder the streets of New York alone at night alone, especially that alleyways. What happen when the sheriff's daughter, Chloe, found herself in that alleyways and bumped into the town's most infamous gang? Will her father, the sheriff, choose to trust Chloe or will he still insist on locking the gang up? Both sides are going at fully force, blood will be spilled. etc)       The page was a little disorganized with some of the pictures missing and the description being too long. I feel that the foreword's information, it would be enough so try to shorten the description to just one paragraph and followed by foreword.        Plot: (17/20)    At first, it's going to a be overuse plot where the gangster member fall for the girl and they will date but I was wrong. I love how you make Chloe, the Sheriffs' daughter and I love how you make Seungjin and Chloe together first. However, I feel that the story didn't feel realistic enough. They just allowed Chloe to follow them back home knowing that she might be the sheriffs' daughter?            Language: (12/20)   Overall, I feel that you language is alright. You're might be good with tenses and vocabulary but you need to work harder on sentence structure, punctuation, conversations and you have quite a few words that you have some misconceptions.   First misconception is 'Alot'. I know that most people write it in 'alot' but for a more serious type of writing, 'a lot' is a safer choice. Second misconception is using 'were'. It sounded a whole lot as 'where' and 'we're' and you sometimes wrote 'where' as 'were'. Third misconception is writ