Review for darkreverie13 // By: infiniteLC

Title and Story Link:

The Guardian (On going, reviewed with 4 chapters)

Title: (8/10)

The title isn't all that catchy, honestly. It gives us a good clue of what the story is going to be about but then again, so many authors had already used this title before. I'm not saying that it was a bad choice but because if I had just stumble upon it, I wouldn't do a double-take on it. I would have think that it's one of those cliche, EXO vampire or warewolf stories :3

Overall appearance: (8/10)

I like your poster. It gives off the good vibe that the story is supposed to be. One thing that I am kind of iffy about is the way your designer angle the girl. She looks kind of awkward just being paste at the top corner alone. Maybe if she could have been bigger and blend in next to SungGyu then the poster would have been excellent!

I like your use of font but then again, I have to say it is kind of too small for me to read. Don't get me wrong, my vision is 20/20 but because you kind of made the size a little too small, I had trouble reading it :3 Did you used size 12 or 14? If you did used 12 then I prefer that you use 14 :D

Description and Foreword: (9/10)

Your description is clear enough for me to understand what the story is going to be about. I like how it has that mysterious feel to it. It gives us an idea of what is going to happen in the story but it also doesn't tell us exactly what is going to happen so I credit that part for you. One thing I was really iffy about his your description about the characters. Don't get me wrong, I like giving descriptions for my characters also but I just thought that you kind of wrote a little too much and that sort of ruined their image because now we know how they are going to be like. 

Plot: (20/20)

Your plot, I like! It's quite interesting for me because the more I read into the chapters, the more I want to continue. I like how you are slowly dragging some actions into each chapters and slowly describing them neatly. I honestly have to say that I'm not into this kind of genre because I love to read schoollife fanfics and fluff only but your kind of plot got me a little hooked because I kept wanting to know how she will think of SungGyu when she sees him. I like that mysterious feel to it and it drives me crazy to see how SungGyu will protect her from that crazy madman who keeps trying to seek for her. 

Language: (13/20)

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