Review for Kpoplover_suah       Title and Story Link:   The Dark Secret of the Nerd (Ongoing, reviewed with 11 chapters)       Title: (8/10)   The title suits the story and relates to the plot well too. However, I felt that it's an extrememly common title that turn people away because the word 'Secret' and 'Nerd' is overuse all the time. I think 'Her Dark Secrets', 'The Darkest Secret', 'My Darkest Secret', 'The Nerd's Secret', 'That Mysterious girl's Identity' or something else more special would be better :)       Poster: (6/10)   The poster(use for the main picture currently that have exo at the bottom of the poster) was the best among all hence I'm placing it as your representative poster since you didn't state which you would want to be talk about here. (Hope you don't mind!) This poster was the best because it was attractive to the eye, clean and it wasn't filled with too much distractions. However, what could be better improve for the poster is that the picture didn't directly represent angst, dark or gang. Lastly, it could be better if the quote could stand out next to the title of the story in the poster.        Another thing I would like to add is that quote isn't quite grammatically correct. "I'm not the one who think I am'' could be better written off as "I'm not who you think I am." The feeling that this quote was giving off is good and it's suitable too. Godd thinking!           Description and Foreword: (17/20)   Your description was very well written and it was interesting to me. However, as I've mentioned, I wouldn't use the term 'Nerd' as it's too overrated and people might misunderstood your story as one of those typical story so try to not use this word as much as possible. (In addition, she wasn't really a nerd just because she wears thick glasses. She also didn't listen well in class so I wouldn't name her a nerd; plus there's nothing else that's indicating that she's a nerd in the story so far.)    The only thing that your page was missing is the introduction to characters! I think it would be a lot better if you would to introduce the characters in this page because your story have quite a lot of characters and this would help the readers to get to know some basic statistic information beforehand. For example, Luhan's background story is vague and we barely know the connection between every individual exo-m memebers with the main girl. Just give a short description of each main characters will already help a lot.       Overall the page was still extremely organized and clean.       Storyline/Plot: (15/20)    I think you have quite an interesting and good plot for this story. I like how it's about a gangster running away from her own gang but still, there's a lot of holes missing in the plot but the biggest problem that I think you're facing is how fast the story is developing! Right from the chapter one, she had escape her gang without any main reason or explanation! The holes missing is why is she suddenly leaving her gang, why did her father just called up abruptly and said that he doesn't ever want to see her again? The story would be better if it's going slower and by a