>It's Just For Show

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Review for momodays09        Title and Story Link:   It's Just For Show (Completed story with 15 chapters)       Title: (8/10)   The title length was ideal and relates well to the story but it felt rather weird. I felt that 'It's Just a Show'  will be better but otherwise, good title!           Poster: (6/10)   The poster was a little messy and everywhere. For the quote, it shouldn't be shadowed as it's hard to read and made it confusing. Too many different types of font was use for the title and each other word was giving a different feel instead of having them the same.  Still, the pictures use was good and it's still acceptable.           Description and Foreword: (17/20)   The description and foreword page look a little too empty because there wasn't any pictures, colour or background picture for it. You could add L's picture and a ulzzang girl in this page and add a few lines below it to spice the page up. Lastly, I felt that your description could be better written because you have a great and cute story.           Storyline/Plot: (16/20)    At first I was lazy to read and do a review for it as you've mentioned that it's similar to the show in Mnet and I do not like that show but you made me like your story. After reading the first few chapters, I couldn't stop! I love how this is a short story of seven days because anything longer than 7 days is too draggy in my opinion. I've subtracted 4 marks b
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babyblueunicorn
#1
Chapter 179: Saw it now, I am so sorry for all the misspelling and all... That specific story was written before I had any experience here.... LOL

Yes, I would love to help you with your Spanish homework.
Claro, me encantaría ayudate con tu tarea de español cuando la escuela empiece. ¿De dónde eres? ¿En qué grado estas? ¡Háblame por mensaje privado!
hermeh #2
read my fic? :)