Review for Misa-chanlovesyou       Title and Story Link:   The Seat Next To You (Ongoing, reviewed with 15 chapters)       Title:   The title was good and it relates to the story but I felt that it could be better. Since 'The Seat Next To You' is a story only for Eunhyuk and Donghae, I feel if you would to create a title from the romance of Kyuhyun with Sungmin and Reowook with Yesung, it could be a better title.       Poster:   The poster was well made and I'm glad that there's names under the main character's picture to help the readers who aren't familiar with Super Junior. I think a way to make it even better for readers is to have a visual link between the characters. For example, have Sungmin and Kyunhyun together in a small box and the other couple too to indicate that they're a couple in this story.       Description and Foreword:     I think your description and foreword could be quite deceiving as it's more focus on the romance shared by two man and that each couple is being told differently as though it's a one-shot collection. Moreover, I think you could add a introduction to the characters in the foreword because there's quite a lot of main characters in this story.        Storyline/Plot:    The plot is going really well but I out of all three couple's plot, I love Eunhyuk and Donghae best with the story about sitting next to each other. I felt that you need to focus on one couple and make the other two just supporting characters or else the plot of the story can get quite confusing at first. However, thankfully after reading up to chapter 11, I'm getting better with remember each other's background story and their couple story. Secondly, I wasn't quite sure about Ryeowook and Yesung's story because I doubt that the family take the news that easily(especially they're mom!) and how no one is actually interfering them enough.            Language:    I really love your writing style, it's informal and fun! Language wise too, you're really good but there's a few things I would like to talk about.    : Sometimes the words could be better replace or move to make the sentence better or more complete. You could do so by reading your story aloud and sometimes