Review for risawesome {Second request}       Title and Story Link:   EXO Scenarios Collection (Completed, reviewed chapter 6, Kris, one-shot)       Title: (9/10)   The story was straight forward and simple but I felt it didn't draw enough attention or interesting.           Poster: (-/10)   There wasn't any poster for the story but there's a main picture for chapter 6. I was confuse and misunderstood the picture because it's Suho with Kris and the story is about Kris and a girl. Placing a solo shot of Kris might be better and readers will not get confuse thinking that it's a Suho + Kris story.           Description and Foreword: (16/20)   Even though the page looks organized and clean but it's too plain. The description wasn't interesting enough to make readers want to read on and author's note should be in the foreword instead of description.            Storyline/Plot: (17/20)    The plot didn't have any memorable or complicated plot, it's a rather peaceful and calm plot. (Like you've mention, a boring plot since you're running out of ideas) You could make it better by describing more emotions, feelings and having a clear and long flashback about their relationship. Why would they get engaged if they ended up being shy and almost didn't communicate much.        However, a high mark was still given because of it's rather cute and unexpected ending. Although I've seen a smiliar reanctment, it was using a completely different item! (Iris k-drama use this scene to pass a candy from the man's mouth to the lady's mouth) It was still rather weird seeing someone having a ring on they're mouth as a surprise but at least it was unique and unexpected.               Characters: (6/10)   The main characters was poorl