Review for BellaOh // By: caffeine_kiss

Title and Story Link:

Title: (9/10)

The title ‘Rose’ to be honest is kind of boring and vague. Unfortunately, I don’t think I can comment much on it since you are only 5 chapters into your story and the significance of the rose has not been showcased yet.

Overall Appearance: (8/10)

The picture used for Yoojin was great, it really portrayed her character. Bolding your words created an effect on what you wanted to emphasized too, which was good. Do request for a poster and add a background too.

Description and Foreword: (8/10)

Everything throughout was well written. But I think you could have written more about the plot. For example, the significance of ‘rose’ in the story since it is, after all, the title of your story.

Plot: (17/20) 

I have to be honest here and say that I have seen this storyline on Asian fanfics a few times already. The special thing about your story I guess is because there is the use of a rose which I guess would help readers relate more to the feelings of both the protagonist. I have a little problem with the the starting of the story where Sehun almosts likes Yoojin immediately, it would be better if you add in some internal conflicts with himself as, Yoojin's social status is much lower than his, rather than him admitting he likes Yoojin so quickly. Lastly, my suggestion is that perhaps you could give a twist to the story as if you do continue in this pace, the story may get boring.

Language: (19/20)

Your language overall was superb. You have an extensive range of vocabulary which is great as it really brings out Yoojin's inner feelings. The only