Review for exoticbabylove {Second Review}       Title and Story Link:   My Dead Fangirl (Ongoing, reviewed with 6 chapters)       Title: (7/10)   The title was a little too straightforward but it relates well to the storyline and your story could be found easily through the search engine. (good!)       Poster: (9/10)   The poster was suits the theme and looks neat!  I love how the overall look for the poster turn out to be a dark coloured and this suits the theme of supernatural and angst! (I was glad that Daehyun wasn't added to the poster or it might look too crowded!)       Description and Foreword: (18/20)   I'll start talking about the description first, I didn't like how you started with introducing about the story being a story of a ghost that falls in love with a human part. I would have like it better if the excerpt be the description of the story because it's much more interesting and unique. I've read many plots about a ghost/soul fall in loves with a human stories but never about a dead fangirl who became a ghost and look for her idol.        The idea about 100 deeds was also good, but I felt that 100 would be a bit too much to cover. One good deed could take around 2 chapters at least so 100 deeds sounds too much to write and cover. A smaller number such as 30-50 good deeds would be ideal instead of a 100.        Another note was that I felt that too much was revealed in this page, admittedly it's important to give information of the story but not too much, just a little to make the readers interested enough to read on and subscribe/vote/comment.           Storyline/Plot: (17/20)    As I've mentioned in description and foreword, 100 deeds would be too many to cover! I would recommend having a ideal number such as 20 but try to be realistic about it. I feel that the plot was going too fast that we didn't have much time to connect with the characters. It would be better to start the story but having a normal day for Sumin where she bullies everyone and how she live her life before writing about the golden ticket to meet EXO. This way, the readers could try to understand Sumin better and could visua