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Review for WE_ARE_ONE       Title and Story Link:   OOPS! I Killed the Tree Of Life (Ongoing, reviewed with 4 chapters)       Title: (8/10)   The title was interesting and original but I felt that it was slightly too long and 'OOPS!' is informal. Since your writing style are more towards informal 'Oops' is actually fine :)           Poster: (8/10)   For the poster, I would really like to see the title standing out from the poster and try to stick the same font, size and colour for the title to make it look better.           Description and Foreword: (16/20)   It looks really professional and lovely however the font use for the words are too small for comfort. Love the way you introduce the characters with pictures and small details about them.   Some typos form the excerpt given:   1. Maybe i'm in heaven.   -Maybe I'm in heaven.       2. You couldn't quite make out his face. He poised his head upwards seeing that you've awoken.    - You can't quite make out who it was until he poised his head upwards when he saw that you're awake.        3. You found your self an iridescent boy, well not exactly a boy, a man one of a kind he truly is, one with a familiar face,.   - You found yourself face to face with an iridescent boy, well not exactly a boy, a man with a familiar face.           Storyline/Plot: (18/20)    The storyline and plot was interesting and I was constantly curious from the foreword/description page. Even though it does reminds me of 'MAMA' as there's about an exo planet and superpow
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babyblueunicorn
#1
Chapter 179: Saw it now, I am so sorry for all the misspelling and all... That specific story was written before I had any experience here.... LOL

Yes, I would love to help you with your Spanish homework.
Claro, me encantaría ayudate con tu tarea de español cuando la escuela empiece. ¿De dónde eres? ¿En qué grado estas? ¡Háblame por mensaje privado!
hermeh #2
read my fic? :)