Review: My stories, with these twelve men     Review for Chulmarie08       Title and Story Link:   My Stories, with these twelve men (Ongoing, reviewed with 8 chapters)       Title: (9/10)   It's a simple, straight forward and good title. However, my only concern is that it's too long.           Poster: (8/10)   The poster was very good but I felt that the font could be clearer, biggerand better. Secondly, I felt that the exo picture could be organise by using pictures with the same photoshoot to make the poster look more tidy.           Description and Foreword: (18/20)   The description and foreword page was organize, not too wordy and interesting! I love how you wrote both your description and foreword! For your description, it was simple and it got my interests. For your foreword, it was personal and organize. What I believe could be better is telling the readers that it will be a compilation of one-shot.           Storyline/Plot Total: (14/20)    Storyline/Plot for Chapter 5 Chanyeol: (8/10)    I love the plot and how you wrote it! However, there was still plenty of typo and small mistakes here and there but I was smiling throughout the story! Another thing is that some information are vague and they're needed in the story.    For example, how did Baekhyun died? How did Chanyeol get into an accident?           Storyline/Plot for Chapter 6 & 7 Xiumin: (9/10)      Even though this was the opposite theme of the one shot of Chanyeol, I love this as much too! It was mysterious and really realistic! I'm really glad how it ended too! The score is higher than Chanyeol's because there's two part which means a longer storyline and more information! The plot cover almost every aspects and the only few things that is missing is what exactly Xiumin does, what's his job, why did you leave him?              Characters: (6/10)   For chapter 5, the characters are all very vague because the plot/storyline was too short and I felt that I was rushed.   However, for chapter 7 and 8 the c