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  Review for softhard27     Title and Story Link:   Soosica Journey as Parents - Oneshot Collection (Ongoing, reviewed with 6 chapters)       Title: (8/10)   The title was catchy and it was interesting! However, I felt that the title was too long and it's quite misleading to say that it's a one-shot collection story. It's because if you read one chapter randomly itself as a oneshot, the story will not link together and thus I feel that it's a short story instead :)           Poster: (8/10)   The poster was pretty and it reflect the story well but I love your background image more as it's more concentrated on the two main characters - Jessica and SooYoung. From the main image (poster), it felt that it's more concentrated on Taeyeon, Seohyun and Sunny when it's suppose to be SooYoung and Jessica. Lastly, the small quote in between the title - No family is perfect, is almost non-visible because of it's font and no spacing in between.           Description and Foreword: (18/20)   Everything was very well written and I love how frank you were for the description. It was straight to the point, not too wordy and yet still making it interesting and worth while! The page looks extremely neat and organized too. What I feel would make it better is to have pictures to go along with all of the main characters in the story. As you're having their kids name as Taeyeon, Seohyun and sunny, it might misinterpret readers as the adult version of them making it weird! However, it's nothing important as after reading the first few chapter, I was able to catch up and visualize better.       Storyline/Plot: (19/20)    Since you've mentioned in the description that it's going to be heavily and most about their moment instead of having better romance or more engaging plot, there isn't much I could say. If you didn't warn me earlier in the description, I would have deducted a lot of marks because it's more towards the connection between SooYoung and Jessica and t
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babyblueunicorn
#1
Chapter 179: Saw it now, I am so sorry for all the misspelling and all... That specific story was written before I had any experience here.... LOL

Yes, I would love to help you with your Spanish homework.
Claro, me encantaría ayudate con tu tarea de español cuando la escuela empiece. ¿De dónde eres? ¿En qué grado estas? ¡Háblame por mensaje privado!
hermeh #2
read my fic? :)