Review: Hunhan Romantica: Pure Romance     Review for LittleLiars       Title and Story Link:   Hunhan Romantica: Pure Romance (Ongoing, reviewed with 3 chapters)       Title: (9/10)   In my opinion, the title way slightly too long. 'Hunhan Romantica' or just 'Pure Hunhan Romance' might be better.           Poster: (10/10)   The poster you're using was amazing, there wash nothing I could deduct the point about. It look so damn good too.           Description and Foreword: (17/20)   I felt that what you choose to write for the Description wasn't the best and it wasn't interesting. It's such a waste because your storyline/plot is great and if readers choose to not continue reading because of the description and that will be such a pity. The part 'Sehun. That e…' was great so maybe everything before that remove and add something else.  The page, was however, still considered very organize and clean - great job!           Storyline/Plot: (18/20)   I love the plot a lot, I don't usually like reading , yuri or in general because sometimes most of the stories are too much uality that it become too much and ended up drowning the storyline. However, yours was great and it still focuses on the plot! I was constantly on the edge, wanting to know what might happen next or what the ending will be!        Two marks was deducted because sometimes the scene or flashback was too long that it seems that we are currently on that flashback instead and some sometimes a scene doesn't make sense. For example, the first chapter. Although the flashback was obvious with the words being italic, the scene didn't make sense. Are they still in the library when Sehun made Luhan moaned? Where are they in chapter 2? The canteen?       Characters: (14/20)   Since it's going to be chaptered story with a lot  of main ch