Review for risawesome       Title and Story Link:   Be Mine. (Ongoing, reviewed with 3 chapters)       Title: (6/10)   First of all, the title has been use a lot of time and people will take a hard time to look for yours. Secondly, 'Be Mine' didn't quite relate to the story so far but I do feel that it will relate at one point but it isn't the main highlight of the plot.           Poster: (-/10)   There isn't any poster or background picture and hence couldn't be graded.           Description and Foreword: (10/20)   The description and foreword page discourage readers to read on beause there wasn't any peek or excerpt of the story to make it intersting. Author's note should be on the foreword and your description should have an excerpt of the story. It's also recommended to add a introduction of all of your main characters in the foreword, if it's possible.           Storyline/Plot: (14/20)   After finishing chapter 3, the plot feels like it's just a typical two guys fighting to make a girl fall in love with them. I felt that it's lacking in connection, feelings, dynamic and there wasn't any complications. Whenever you're writing about her feelings toward Kyungsoo and Jongin, add more description on how she felt towards both of them and this will create a better connection. The dynamic should start from small to big so this way you could add more complications to make the story better. For example, she started alone, later friends with Kyungsoo but some complications came up, she's indecisive about both men. Secondly, I felt everything was moving too fast! You should have a few chapters to slowly introduce the main characters and how can Kyungsoo be friends with you suddenly?           Characters: (8/10)   You're good at having the readers know more about the characters without directly telling us. For example, you've describe her as rich and likes to be lonely in the